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    November 12

    Poem of the day, - Villanelle 2005

    Gray, blue, white and red.)
    Flags wave as drums tap and boys fall down,
    too many young men shot dead.

    Who will be responsible for this carnage, the general that led
    the charge as the battle cries screamed their piercing sound?
    (Gray, blue, white and red.)

    Vultures pluck bones clean, growing fat on flesh fed;
    Some soldiers lucky to even get buried six foot underground.
    Too many young men shot dead.

    When mama got the news about Johnny she took to bed,
    Overcome with sorrow and anguish no solace found.
    (Gray, blue, white and red.)

    Thinking of other sons fills me with dread,
    Curse the ones responsible, wretched and lowdown,
    Too many young men shot dead.

    When will it end, all the bloodshed?
    To this question, no immediate reply can be found,
    (Gray, blue, white and red.)
    Too many young men shot dead.
     

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    Happy Guywrote:
    Freedom is paid for.  The Union soldiers fought to free the blacks
    from slavery.  Many lives were lost.  and in World War 2, We fought
    against the tyrant Hitler and the nazis.  We are free today because
    men lost their  lives to keep us free.  The aggressive Bully has to be stopped.  Girls in Iraq and afganistan are free to go to school now because of the brave young men who went over and fought for them.
    Nov. 13

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